...reflections of seasonal moods...
this is my room of pen and papers...
words which are scattered in various seasons...
some words are colorful, but some are grey..!
...reflections of seasonal moods...
this is my room of pen and papers...
words which are scattered in various seasons...
some words are colorful, but some are grey..!
Finished!!! Jacobetta,,, I felt an incompleteness in this story... it may b ma prblm..bcz....while readng i thot it's a story which keep me here more tym to complt it.... Evn its a small story, I think, its hav a diffrnt style... wat u r showing is really one of the falsehood side of today's love... I think u hav a scope to write the 2nd part of dis story ;-) (ya,, u can post as episodes like mega serials :-):-)). Like d picture u chose 4 dis, which is an apt one.....
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ReplyDeleteJC,even I felt an incompleteness in this story as the first comment says. Please try to complete the story as readers like us can really enjoy. As of now the story has got a mood and also a real feel of today's frienships and romantic affairs. Any ways I am to the side of Sulekha in the dispute happenned. Expect from you the rest of the story ASAP...
ReplyDeleteHai chetta..Be frank, i too felt an incompleteness in this story.. Didn't get complete perfection compared to the previous ones... Always begin with an arresting first paragraph or lead, enough to grab the readers and make them curious to know what happens next...Anyway, keep writing !!!!
ReplyDeleteI support the girl Jacob. I feel what she said is correct...
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Really nice story Jacob, perfectly suiting to the current day life style of youngsters and their emotions...Jacob, you have in-depth idea about the mind setup of those two different personalities and even talk on behalf of them, their views and expressions.. Here I think no one can be blamed or appreciated, be it Shyam, Sulekha or the Story writer...Everyone is having their realistic approach and mask-less expressions and deeds...Story writer - Jacob- has shown loyalty to his duty, ie illustrating all characters as what they are.., though he is seemingly little more biased to Sulekha's attitude... Yes, that should be the way.. It is not a nice attitude to intrude into others privacy.. But Shyam has also no mask, so he has given an opportunity to express what he really is and what he expects from Sulekha.. It would have been a catastrophe later in their married life had he did not express his possessive and doubt-clearing inquisitive attitude earlier before marriage.. He has given Sulekha an opportunity to proceed or not to proceed very early itself preventing a future failure... I really like this story by you Jacob, congrats. Keep it up.
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